How else could the text have been written? It could've been written from Johnny's or Darry's Point of view. reading their side of the story.
Who is missing from the text?It would be a bit more interesting if Johnny's parents or Playboys parents before they died were in the text.
What has been left out of the text? Why johnny's parents treated johnny that way.What other things Dally had been holding in.
Helloooo Neika, you have used great punctuation and great writing,I think it would be good to add a little more information. GoOd JoB! :)))))
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