How else could the text have been written? It could've been written from Johnny's or Darry's Point of view. reading their side of the story.
Who is missing from the text?It would be a bit more interesting if Johnny's parents or Playboys parents before they died were in the text.
What has been left out of the text? Why johnny's parents treated johnny that way.What other things Dally had been holding in.
Helloooo Neika, you have used great punctuation and great writing,I think it would be good to add a little more information. GoOd JoB! :)))))
ReplyDeleteHey Neika, I like the answers you have put in and how you've added an image of The Outsiders novel, though I would like to know more about the answer you wrote saying "What other things Dally had been holding in." and what you meant by that and would like you to explain a little more, also maybe you could just look over your writing and fix up a few mistakes. Other than that it looks great good job!!.
ReplyDeleteHey Neika. You have used great punctuation and your writing was good, maybe next time explain a bit more about what you think of the book and what could have been better.
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