"Team sports are better than individual sports"
Your argument? Team sports are better individual sports.
Good things about team sports:
Help with communication skills.
Teamwork
Use the team's different strengths to back each other.
Goods things about individual sports:
Only have to rely on your self.
Have to work on your self to get better not the whole team.
Order of ideas
Teamwork
Communication
Introduction:
First paragraph:
There are a lot of good things you need to have or learn if you want to play in a team. One of these things being teamwork. You need to teamwork a lot in life. For example, In many jobs, you need to be able to work well with people. By playing team sports you are already learning how to work with other peoples strengths.
Second paragraph:
You've listed some great ideas Neika. Hopefully next time you have more time to fit them into your essay :)
ReplyDeleteHey Neika, you have great arguments in your planning hopefully next time you could add them to your essay.
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