Persuasive-Week 3 Term 4- English.

"Movies are better than books"

Opinion-Disagree. 

Movies:

Watch a story in less time.

Show you better 

Books: 

movies are based on books

Movies leave stuff out.

Use your imagination.

Organize:

1st paragraph

Movies leave stuff out.

2nd paragraph

Use your imagination.

3rd Paragraph

Movies are based on books

Introduction:

1st Paragraph: 

One of the many reasons I think books are better than movies is that movies leave stuff out. movies usually last for an hour-hour and a half. For example, harry potter books have a load more information compared to the movies. In these movies, some characters have been cut out, while other characters say things that they didn't say in the books. 

2nd Paragraph:

Watch movies doesn't really leave a lot of space for imagination. While reading about you think of what characters look and sound like in your head, However in movies, you can see how each character looks like and their emotions throughout the movie. But while reading you can create your own things from the story using the descriptive words in each sentence. 

I am aiming to improve my writing in the following 3 areas: Structure and Language, Sentence Structure, and Vocabulary

Persuasive-Week 2 Term 4- English.

"Team sports are better than individual sports"
Your argument? Team sports are better individual sports.

Good things about team sports:
Help with communication skills.
Teamwork
Use the team's different strengths to back each other.

Goods things about individual sports:
Only have to rely on your self.
Have to work on your self to get better not the whole team.

Order of ideas
Teamwork
Communication


Introduction:


First paragraph:
There are a lot of good things you need to have or learn if you want to play in a team. One of these things being teamwork. You need to teamwork a lot in life. For example, In many jobs, you need to be able to work well with people. By playing team sports you are already learning how to work with other peoples strengths.

Second paragraph:

Pasta-Home ec- week 2 term 4-

Product/outcome

Feedback? It was alright but should cook more of it.

Improvement or modifications which can make? More pasta, less sauce

Next steps for own learning

The task- To make pasta

Skills within the team- Working well in the group and not arguing

Time management- We good of gone faster but we still manage to finish in time.

Art-Term-3/4- 23 Oct 2019

What is your work about?  We doing a mural. The mural has to relate to the word whanaungatang(meaning relationship) 

How is it composed?  We made our vocal point the words(Whanau Aroha/Family love) and add a heart behind the o in Aroha. 

Why have you used the colours you have used? We used Pink and blue because we thought it would look good together. 

What indigenous art movements have you referenced? how? We will be adding Indigenous symbols to the sides of the mural. 

Include a picture

Volcanoes-Science

Name a volcano? Paricutin.
Where is it? In Mexico.
Is it extinct, dormant or active?  It's extinct.
What type of volcano is it? A cinder cone.

What rocks are formed by this volcano? Extrusive Igneous rocks

Persuasive writing- The South Island is better than the North Island.

The South Island is better than the North Island.

List of good things about South Island:
Warmer weather

List of good things about the North Island:
less traffic.
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Introduction:


First paragraph:
One thing that is better about North Island is that there is less traffic.

Second paragraph:
Although the North Island has less traffic, The South Island has warmer weather. This is because It's closer to Australia and the equator. Therefore the seasons are hotter in the South Islands.

Third Paragraph:

Conclusion: