Persuasive writing- Older buildings should not be demolished and replaced with more energy efficient buildings.

Older buildings should not be demolished and replaced with more energy efficient buildings.

Ideas:
Can have things done to it to make it more energy efficient.
Some buildings have Art on them,.
Good for environment
Expand:
1. Some buildings have Art on them, Have old buildings can show people how things use to look like. have some interesting story's behind the house

2. Can have things done to it to make it more energy efficient, Solar panels, Energy efficient heaters.

3. saves energy so its good for the environment 

Writing: 

There are a lot of old buildings around Christchurch. A lot of these buildings are very special to the people that live in Christchurch. Demolishing these buildings will get rid of the art on them. You could add things into the building to save energy. It will also save energy for the mean time.

Christchurch is fulled with old buildings. If we were to demolish them it would get rid of most of the art on the buildings. Quite few tourists come to Christchurch to look at all the art and the stories that the display shows. Taking away the buildings with end in less money that is needed for important things like health.  Instead of getting rid of the buildings you could just add some energy efficient things to it.

The Art in Christchurch is very special to the people who live there and the people who want to see it. You could keep the buildings but simply just adding in some energy efficient appliances. For example you could add some Solar panels or some energy efficient heaters. Changing the light bulbs to some that is energy efficient as well. Doing these things might also help with the environment.