MY writing for the week

here is my writing that i have been working on this week. it hasn't been finished yet.

The smell of butter over takes me.

I can hear kids screaming while running past.

Role up role up says the booth owner. Before I got to the booth everything had gone . The owner look at all the money on the table, with no hesitation he put it in a old box. As I walk down the road I stop at the ferris wheel. It look like rainbow with all the colors. I jumped onto one of the seats, at the top of the ferris wheel the view was beautiful